Comma conundrums & other punctuation perplexities

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  • Jena Macato

    Thanks a bunch, gals!!
  • Jennie Ann

    I'm having comma doubts and seeking counsel from the august members of this forum.

    I keep going back and forth with comma placement, and I'd love to hear from y'all about this comma conundrum.

    Example A. I went to the store, and, as I opened the door, I saw oranges.

    Example B. I went to the store, and as I opened the door, I saw oranges.

    Should a comma be after "and" or not? I used to not do it, but I switched my style a while back and am now putting a comma there.

    Am I becoming too comma crazy? Please advise. :-)
  • Brenda Rogers

    I wouldn't use wouldn't use a comma after and. Too heavy and unnecessary.
  • Jennie Ann

    Thanks so much, Brenda. I do value your style and judgment a lot.

    Please let me throw one more out at you.

    Example A. I went to the store, but, when I saw him, I ran away.
    Example B. I went to the store, but when I saw him, I ran away.

    Which is your preference?
  • Brenda Rogers

    Again, the one comma before the conjunction is enough.

    And thank you! :)
  • Jennie Ann

    I have often wondered about percentage numbers being hyphenated when preceding a noun.

    Example A. We have a 20-percent inflation rate.
    Example B. We have a 20 percent inflation rate.

    My overloaded brain is telling me that it should be Example A. I never see it that way, though. I think that "20 percent" is almost like a descriptive adjective for "inflation rate." What do y'all think about hyhen usage with percentages?
  • Christine Kirley

    Jennie,
    I agree with Brenda; the comma before "and "is sufficient, as well as the comma before "but" in your other example.
  • Keith Rowan II

    Jennie, just saw your question about percent with the hyphen. Morson says to never put the hyphen with percents like that. She says it is because it is a ratio. I have no idea what that means, but I do agree that it doesn't need the hyphen.
  • Jennie Ann

    Hey, thanks for that, Keith. I am going to have to get me a copy of Morson's English Guide for Court Reporters. It seems I have every other reference book ever made, but when the Internet came, I quit buying hard-copy books.

    I see it is available on Amazon, but it's over 100 bucks. They do offer it on Kindle. You know, if I could get a bunch of reference books on a Kindle, I might buy one. I can see how that would be handy having a bunch of reference sources in one Kindle by my desk.

    Thanks for the great info, Keith! :-)
  • Marla Sharp

    I just found this site which says "23 percent increase" wouldn't be hyphenated but "23-percent-a-year-increase" would be. Click here.
  • Jennie Ann

    Thanks, Marla. That was a very informative read. I enjoyed it. I especially learned something new with the fractions.

    This reminds me of one term that keeps popping up, and that is "half-a-dozen." I always tend to hyphenate it.

    Example A. We bought a half-a-dozen.
    Example B. We bought a half a dozen.

    A or B, which do you like?
  • Jennie Ann

    Hi, Roxy! Yeah, I'm sweating it big time. It's the timecoding that's a PITA

    Thanks for the reply on the "half a dozen." :-)

    Did you receive the latest Jane Strauss Grammar Book "English Tip of the Week" e-mail about "onto" and "on to"? Wow! That was a great tip she shared. I always get those two confused.

    For those who may not have received it, here's a copy-and-paste:

    On to vs. Onto

    An inquisitive reader asked the following question:

    When do you use on to vs. onto?

    Answer: Use onto as one word if you can add up before on.

    Example: He climbed (up) onto the roof.
    Example: She held on to her child in the crowd. (She did not hold up her child.)
  • Stacy Tegner

    Great tip, Jennie ~ I don't get those e-mails, but I always mix those up. Thanks for sharing!!
  • Christine Kirley

    Jenny,
    Thanks for sharing the "on" "onto" tip. It's so nice and easy.
    How do you get signed up for those grammar tips?
  • Marla Sharp

    Jennie, you shouldn't hyphenate "half a dozen." I can't think of a time when you could, even with a noun after it, like "half a dozen donuts."
  • Jennie Ann

    Thanks, Marla, for the reply. I always stumble on these kinds of things when they come up in transcripts. It is nice to have this forum to fall back on for help! :-)

    BTW, Christine and Stacy, if you want to get weekly e-mails for the "English Tip of the Week" from Jane Straus, it's FREE: Scroll Down to the Bottom and sign up for FREE Weekly e-Newsletter

    Sometimes I do learn new things from this weekly e-mail. I really enjoy it.
  • Christine Kirley

    Jennie,
    Thanks for the hypertext on the newsletterr. I will check it out. Have a good weekend.
  • Heidi J. Ryder

    Does anyone have a recommendation for determining affect or effect usage?
  • Rosalie DeLeonardis

    EnglishTip of the Week
    Effect vs. Affect
    Knowing whether to use effect or affect may not qualify you as a genius, but you will be demonstrating an understanding about a grammar issue most people find perplexing. I trust that the strategies offered here will clear up any confusion you have had.

    Rule: Use the verb effect when you mean bring about or brought about, cause or caused.

    Example: He effected a commotion in the crowd.

    Example: She effected a change in procedure.

    Rule: Use the noun effect when you mean result.

    Example: What effect did that speech have?

    Rule: Also use the noun effect whenever any of these words precede it: a, an, any, the, take, into, no.

    Note: These words may be separated from effect by an adjective.

    Example: That book had a long-lasting effect on my thinking.

    Rule: Use the verb affect when you mean to influence rather than to cause.

    Example: How do the budget cuts affect your staffing?

    Rule: Affect is also used as a noun to mean emotional expression.

    Example: She showed little affect when told she had won the lottery.
  • Jennie Ann

    Thanks for the GREAT English Tip of the Week, Rosalie. I usually recognize these two words okay, but I do have problems recognizing when "affect" is used as a noun. Fortunately for me, I guess, "affect" doesn't get used very often as a noun.

    Two words I see punctuated incorrectly quite often when proofing transcripts today are "follow up" and "follow-up."

    Example for "follow up": I will follow up on that lead.

    Example for "follow-up": After the meeting, I will send you a follow-up.

    Example for "follow-up": The doctor said I need a follow-up examination.

    "Follow up" with no hyphen is the verb. "Follow-up" with the hyphen is the noun and/or descriptive adjective preceding the noun.
  • Rosalie DeLeonardis

    You're welcome, Jennie. I should have put in there it was from The Blue Book of Grammar and Punctuation.
  • Christine Kirley

    Regarding "follow up" and "follow-up," if you haven't already, you can add to your dictionary an entry with "a follow-up" so that it always trans right. Takes the thinkin out of it on the job. Also, "the follow-up."
  • Marla Sharp

    Angela, "so-and-so" is hyphenated according to m-w.com. So I'd do Mr. So-and-so.
  • Quyen

    How would you write: f-ing or f'ing?

    That's what the witness really said several times.  I like f-ing better.

     

    Thanks!

  • Janiece Young

    Quyen, I saw a close caption just yesterday that had "effing."  I think it's better to do f'ing or f-ing.

    My preference is f'ing.

    Janiece

  • Quyen

    Haha, I've used effing in more casual online forums, never in hard-copy writing.  :D

     

    Still debating f'ing vs. f-ing.  :)

  • Quyen

    Okay, I just had a revelation.  One wouldn't write wouldn-t or can-t, so it makes sense to write f'ing instead of f-ing.

     

    Thanks, Janiece!  ;)

  • Marla Sharp

    I'd use the apostrophe.  I do the same thing with CC'ing, CC'd, etc.

  • LeAnne Law

    Morson's says to use effing.
  • Quyen

    Attorney's fees or attorneys' fees?

     

    Thanks!

  • Marla Sharp

    I do "attorneys' fees" because normally there's more than one attorney involved in a case.  But if you Google "attorneys fees,"  you'll see it mostly comes up "attorney's fees." 

     

  • Quyen

    Thanks, Marla.  I agree with your reasoning.  I think I do attorneys' fees usually, but sometimes I waiver between the two, depending upon whether the sun is shining or not or if I have my favorite slippers on.  I guess I'll try to be consistent and stick with attorneys' fees, like workers' comp.

  • Jody Rake

    You mean "waver"... : )

  • Quyen

    Rotflmao!  Thanks, Jody!  Lol!  Waiver just rolled off my fingers so easily I didn't even think twice!  That's why an awesome proofer is priceless.  Um, you wanna job?  :)

  • Jody Rake

    LOL, Quyen, that is what I do! And I can't turn it off!

  • Audrey C. Eaton

    I am wondering how you would punctuate the following example.  I have seen it punctuated in several ways and I really don't know what is the correct punctuation.  I have looked it up in a variety of references, and there is no solid answer that I can find.  

    When a witness or attorney trails off but is really asking a question.

    Example:  You said it was ...?   or     You said it was --      or  You said it was?

    Thanks for any help you can give me!

  • Jody Rake

    That seems like a personal preference to me. I don't think there is a right or wrong answer. Maybe you could ask your favorite attorney if they have a preference.

  • Quyen

    I used The Gregg Reference Manual.  You said it was . . . ? is correct for trailing off.  There is one space between each dot and the question mark.

    If it's interrupted: You said it was--?

  • Audrey C. Eaton

    Thanks, Quyen. I have been actually doing it with the . . . ? because I have seen it that way in books, but I didn't know if there was really a right/wrong way.  I should have looked more carefully in Gregg's!  They always have the answer, I just don't always have the patience :)

    Many thanks!

  • Quyen

    You're welcome, Audrey.  I'm a huge (correct) punctuation fan.  I totally heart Gregg!

    I just spotted a typo (ugh) in my post.  I meant to say I USE Gregg, not past tense.  :)

  • Audrey C. Eaton

    I actually just bought a new Gregg's, as my old one was in tatters.  I've had it for well-over 15 years, so an update was necessary.  I just have to now sit down and move all my markers to the new book.  I haven't had the chance to sit down and read it yet, but soon!  My other favorite is 1, 2, - by Louise Gilman.  Just ordered a new copy of that as well.  Sometimes it's just easier (because I am that lazy!!) to throw a question out to the masses and see what happens.  

    But I truly thank you for taking the time to look this up.  I can now tell my reporters the correct way to punctuate this common occurrence in their transcripts.  

  • Quyen

    I've been wanting a new Gregg's for a long time.  I've had mine 10+ yrs. now from when I was in CR school.  Even my marker tabs are all faded and dog-earred, and poor ol' Gregg is literally coming apart at the seams.  Maybe I'll ask for a new one for X-mas.  :)

  • Janiece Young

    How would you punctuate this question?

    Thanks,

    Janiece


    Q. Did you ever have any discussion with anyone, Kevin Smith, Randy Jones, to tell Ms. Black that you had put the coils on the truck?

  • LeAnne Law

    I'd do it this way:

    Q.  Did you ever have any discussion with anyone -- Kevin Smith, Randy Jones -- to tell Ms. Black that you had put the coils on the truck. 

  • Audrey C. Eaton

    I agree with LeAnne.  Use the dashes.

  • Janiece Young

    Thanks, ladies.

  • Janiece Young

    How would you punctuate this question?  I'm not sure what to do in the underlined area.

    Thanks.


    Q. Now, Jones Company maintains some information online; correct, on computers?

  • Jody Rake

    I would leave it just as it is.

  • Janet

    I put a comma before correct in instances like that for readability.

  • LeAnne Law

    Now, Jones Company maintains some information online, correct, on computers?

    Morson's Rule 12: "A pair of commas is used to set off the question within the statement."